SKY FLIGHT
by Marcail
Tight spring trampolines
Silver wings of aeroplanes
Smash a summer sky
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About Me
- Marcail
- I enjoy solitary pursuits but love hanging out with friends who share my interests and provide thoughtful conversation. I like theme and costume parties. I don't get to see my family as much as I would like.
6 comments:
I am reminded of 9/11.
I was one of those who watched the impact of the planes into the WTC buildings, completely not understanding what I was seeing. I remember the anchorman saying, "and now we can see fusilage exploding..." when it was actually the second plane's impact. My brain told me something wasn't right.
It wasn't until the collapse that I called my husband to come home.
Strange how the brain tries to make sense of the incomprehensible.
this is haiku done right. enjoyed it. :)
Thanks to Flood and Jim for reading Sky Flight and for your encouraging words.
I like it. I may not be able to comment intelligently on most of your poetry. I am still learning. But know that I am on your site reading and enjoying my stay.
Thanks Fringes. I'm am trying out various poetic forms and devices. Some I meld with better than others. I'm commenting in my comments, but how else would you know I appreciate your encouragement. I'm thrilled when I come across others who enjoy poetry.
Comment in your comments as freely as you like. Thanks for the response.
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